Still Water

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I planned this thriller to have a truly global canvas. I also came up with the idea of starting each chapter or sub-chapter with a Google Earth™ reference so my reader could actually look at the place where the action was unfolding. This also allowed me to ‘walk through’ my proposed tale while viewing the actual location. I thought this was a great concept and sought Google’s approbation, but like many Internet entities actually speaking with anyone proves pretty tough. A decade later, I have not seen anyone else take up this approach.

My hero for this tale was an English celebrity oceanographer and Earth scientist, he was no Jack Reacher or Jack Bauer, instead he was a capable guy being pitched into remarkable situations. The villain was not an individual but instead a new form of water discovered in the Arctic. Initially it would be unclear if it was the result of old material released by melting Arctic ice, or if it has been formed by Russian pollution or nuclear waste, or whether it had fallen there from space. But, this ‘still water’ killed all forms of life it touched, and yet was still chemically water.

There lay my problem, I was determined that it should be chemically plausible and so researched water extensively. Water is strange anyway, given that we accept as perfectly normal that water may naturally appear as solid ice, liquid water or gaseous steam. Imagine my surprise when I found there was a substance called deuterium oxide or D²O, that exists in the ocean. It is often found in comets, and the water found on Mars has 5.5-times that on Earth. In small quantities it is not toxic, but large quantities delivered what I needed.

Pegasus Cover Proof

Deuterium was good news for my plot, but not for rats. In laboratory tests on rodents, when up to 15% of a rodent’s body water is replaced by D²O there is little obvious effect except that the creature does not gain weight normally. As the D²O percentage of body water rises the rodent gets more excitable, until at the 25% level it may convulse and become very aggressive. By the time the D²O content reaches 30% it refuses to eat and can fall in to a coma. If the substance continues to be increased until it reaches 35%, then the rat dies. The good news is that if the researcher stops before the 35% point is reached and puts the rodent back on normal water, then it can still recover and quite quickly.

With the time and freedom in Spain I finished the book in around eighteen months and began the round of letters to agents and publishers and the inevitable rejections.

ASIDE: Rudyard Kipling submitted a short story to a San Francisco newspaper and was advised by the editor, ‘I’m sorry Mr. Kipling, but you just don’t know how to use the English language.’ ‘It is very long and rather old-fashioned’ was the comment Herman Melville received for ‘Moby Dick’. Sixteen agents and twelve publishers rejected John Grisham’s ‘A Time to Kill’. Dan Brown was rejected and told his manuscript of ‘The Da Vinci Code’ was ‘so badly written’. J K Rowling submitted her Harry Potter manuscripts via an agent and was rejected eight times. Agatha Christie was rejected twenty times across five years before she broke through to become the best-selling novelist of all-time. Robert M. Pirsig’s ‘Zen & the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance’ had 121 rejections. There were 200 rejections for Alex Haley’s ‘Roots’. C S Lewis is top of the shop having received 800 rejections before selling any of his writing.

I was accepted by Pegasus Publishers for their imprint Vanguard Press, we agreed a three-book deal as a series with the same hero. I was already well into writing the second.

The fact of becoming a published author seemed to be enough for several months. But as you work with an editor to shake down the manuscript, chose the cover artwork, wrote the blurb and so on, you realise that actually what you want is to be a successful, published author. It became clear that Vanguard was not doing much to make that happen.

They set the publishing date to meet the summer tourist reader market, but when I asked which booksellers they had approached, they had done nothing with those at Heathrow or Gatwick. Their list of those they had contacted were just a subset of south-east locations.

Worse, when I asked about review copies being issued, they said they waited for a reviewer to request these. I paid a friendly PR to send releases to a database of TV, radio and news reviewers and to follow these up to get requests for review copies placed.

Western Daily Press article to promote Still Water

We arranged for press articles, the most notable in the Western Daily Press (tugging on local boy’s done good theme) and several Spanish papers (local ex-pat author done good).

The book’s message about the increasingly worrying world shortage of water was well received, but it never took off given its lack of promotion and living in Spain I couldn’t drum up business around the bookstores.

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